Your test scores and GPA were not high enough
Focusing entirely on SAT or ACT scores and GPAs is a highly efficient way of sorting through applicants. It is a quick way of creating a profile for the type of student that will be admitted to our school. By using this method, we can make sure that we only allow in only those with GPAs above a 4.0 and with standardized test scores in the top percentile. However, while using this method may be efficient, it is not always effective. Students should not be defined by their test scores. “Everybody is a genius. But if you judge a fish by its ability to climb a tree, it will live its whole life believing that it is stupid.” –Albert Einstein. This is exactly what standardized tests do. They attempt to measure intelligence of students and effectiveness of teachers in ways that simply do not fit. “Employing standardized achievement tests to ascertain educational quality is like measuring temperature with a tablespoon” (Popham). Where some students excel in math, others flourish in history, so how can it be that educational quality is measured by having students answer some math problems and write an essay? It can’t be. Every student is different so the idea that they can be measured the same way is unrealistic. Standardized testing sets a bar. Not doing well on these tests does not mean that one doesn’t meet the bar, it simply means that they have been looking at a different bar; not one below it or above it, but a different one. We here at North Harmon choose to ignore all these flaws in our system in the hopes that you don’t notice.
Do not worry though, to balance out the issues that come with this admittance system based on scores alone, we also focus on your personal essays, a method that is equally as flawed. This brings us to our second reason for why you may not have been accepted here.
Your personal essay was boring, unoriginal, or just plain stupid.
We use the personal essay so that we may better ascertain the type of person we are considering for admittance. However, we cannot always determine the type of person we are admitting just from this six hundred-word essay. Students like you are constantly being told what they should and shouldn’t write about. Write about something that has impacted you, but if that something is about the death of a loved one, don’t write about it; admissions officers see that too much. Be truthful, but be sure to write about something interesting and unique even if you’ve lived a fairly average life. These are pointers that are given to applicants every year making it difficult to know what to write about. Obviously just because someone does not have an interesting or unique story does not mean they should not be admitted to a school, and yet the only other way to judge them is test scores and GPAs, which as we have pointed out, have their flaws as well. This is why here at North Harmon Institute of Technology we are dedicated to using both highly flawed methods. They balance each other out, right?
Popham, James. “Why Standardized Tests Don’t Measure Educational Quality.” Using
Standards and Assessments 56.6 (1999): 8-15. ASCD. Web. 20 May 2015.